A Poem About Kiss Of The Morning Sun
68Copyright, Carolee D. Samuda, All Rights Reserved
This poem was written at a time when I was going through a rough time with sickness and sadness. One morning I woke up felling really great as the sun came through the window and warmed my skin. I quickly took a pencil and my notebook and wrote what I was feeling.
I'm telling you I really felt like the sun was making love to me!
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Morning Kisses
Kisses in the morning
Dancing on my cheek
Kisses of the sunlight
Are making me weak
Kisses, lovely kisses
I can’t seem to breathe
Kisses from the sunlight
Awakes me from a dream
Kisses of the sunshine
Aglow on my skin
Kisses of the morning
As the sunbeams come in
No more in a dream world
For kisses are real
Because on this morn
Sunlight kisses I can feel
Standing by the window
Basking in the sun
What compares to these kisses?
And thought, there is none
A beautiful morn, filled with warm
Kisses from head to toe
Wishing this morn will never end
Oh I love it so
Arise! It is morn
Awake from your dream
To experience anew
A kiss from a sunbeam
No more in a dream-world
Embrace this your sunbeam
A morning kiss of sunlight
Is all you really need
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Thank you CeleBritys4africA.
Very good, isn't poetry amazing, there is just no end. My problem is I get so into it it end up more like a story, lol.
Polly
Thank you Pollyannalana, it happens to me too. Take for instance the last few days I have written about every thing. The note book I bought on Monday is already full!
I found a passel of ones I had forgotten about beside new ones I am working on and my laptop went out that I had not saved a folder full, but my son says he has some sort of thing he thinks he can retrieve those for me, I really hope so because I have one there that was really special to me. I have a site of poems and I need another! lol
Well nice meeting a fellow poetry lover.
What beautiful thoughts, and from such a beautiful woman.
Pollyannalana, I hope you retrieve those poems. I to just started a site called Expressions, it needs some work but a few of my poems are there. Good luck!
Hey Will, you always make me blush and feel special. One day I am coming to Arizona!
Beautiful poem, Cardisa. Up here in North Dakota we are still buried deep in snow, so I definitely understand your appreciation of the sun. So do I! Thank you
Thank you SubRon7, I hope you get some sun soon!
...simply delightful are your poetic kisses ..... this shall keep me going for the rest of the day - your writing brings sunshine into my life - and homework assignment for you - what is some of your favorite music?
Hi Epigramman, thank you for your kind words. I am glad my words made your day. I love Abba, Jon Bonjovi, most Reggae, Funky, Soul and natural sounds.
Very well done. I enjoy kisses head to toe ;]
Thanks for all your comments you've been leaving, they haven't gone unnoticed. This was a very nice, uplifting piece
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Thank you Ben, I love your writing so much.
Cardisa
Cardisa , There is no finer lover or kisser than nature, the sun , the morning and don't forget moon kisses......!
Oh! I just love moon kisses, water kisses, flower kisses, all kinds of kisses.
I also love Hershey's kisses too!
Thank you Ahorseback, nice having you visit.
This is a great piece. I like your style of writing a lot!
Wow..I'm impressed!
Beautiful Hub! Simple and sweet..I love it..
A poem like this and all the responses from such beautiful ladies.......God, I wish I was the sun!..:-} Awesome Cardisa!
Thanks Vinsanity, your comment pleases me.
Thanks Blodey girl......love you!
Hello my 'Sunnie' friend, glad you liked it. Have a 'Sunnie Day'.....lol
Hi Ahorseback.
You might not be the sun, but your Hub kisses are welcomed by me any day.
On my profile you can get into the site if you want to have a look and leave me a link to yours, Id love to have a look. I just typed my name into a search and it brought me here! Strange huh?
Hey Polly. I know it's you. I will check out your site and I will definitely exchange links.
I use to Love to sunbathe too , especially in the morning when there was a cool breeze , I love this and i vote up awesome and beautiful , thanks for the read :)
I love kisses from a sunbeam...
There is nothing like bathing in the morning sun Jami. Glad you loved it!
Flora, I am surprised you didn't read this before.
There is nothing like kisses from the sun...lol
Morning Cardisa :0)
Pleased to meet you....great write...reninds me of our time in maui..loved it ...loooking forward to returning there shortly...Of course I come from the Irish Island of ireland..not as warm as jamica LoL....have a great day !!!
Mike :0)
Thank you Mike. I would love to visit Hawaii sometime.
Very nice, I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Lovely Poem, I dreamed such a scene really once in the morning.
Nice words you put there. I just feel that but you wrote it with words.
Nice.
Motti and bander
Thank you Bluebird!
Motti, I know quite a lot of people have experience the sunkissed morning but I guess I caught the pen first..lol
Thanks for reading.
Yes, And thanks a lot for it. Voted up and beautiful.
Motti and bander
celeBritys4africA 14 months ago
Such a lovely poem!